Hi Nathan, a great video and reckon it resonates well with the industry!
Years ago, I visited an adviser friend who was licensed under Dover. Despite the scrutiny and eventual closure following the Royal Commission, I was really impressed by the SOAs they produced. While ASIC had concerns regarding the wording of their client protection policy, which is a separate issue, they did a great job maintaining clarity and conciseness in the SOA. They achieved this by using hyperlinks for generic information, allowing the advice document to focus on clear recommendations and the rationale behind them, along with the standard disclosures.
I'm currently with a large AFSL, and as you mentioned, the documents are often bulky and difficult for clients to comprehend. It would be encouraging to see more progress from the major AFSLs, as this is one of the reasons many advisers are considering self-licensing—a path I'm also exploring.
(I'm not even going to speak about AI as that's a whole other story which is unfolding and looking really exciting!)
Cheers!